Monday, April 26, 2010

For those interested...

This is the introduction to my research paper so far:

http://docs.google.com/Doc?docid=0AYt0U46uX1OXZGduMms2OTdfMzFmOXp6cWpocw&hl=en

Comments/critiques are appreciated!
-emily
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  1. toriApril 28, 2010 at 6:41 PM

    I found the frequent use of the word "can" distracting. But that's just a stylistic critique. I think your intro's great!

    As a side note, are we supposed to include the target audience in the intro?

    -- tori

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